Barbara Halpern wrote:
> <<1. How does this email back that I got 'grab you' or make you feel?
> You spam me again and you will be very impressed with my computer skills.
> ORIGINAL MESSAGE SENT:
> Hi. I have a bunch of mortgage domains for sale. Ideal for mortgage companies or portal sites. Loads of marketing sizzle.
> I am not in the mortgage biz. I am a marketing consultant.
> Do you have any interest in purchasing names? These could be for your clients or new sites. Or for resale.
> These are winning names that will COMMAND market presence.>>
My first impression of your email was that it was "spammy" in nature. I know that you're trying to elicit a response with your marketing copy, but I tend to be more reserved when sending an
unsolicited email. Much like Raj remarked earlier, I personalize the email (if possible; if not possible, I at least try using a title like, "Dear Marketing Manager"), introduce myself and my company
right from the start, and get to my point succinctly and pointedly. I avoid the "fluff" that I find muddies the point of my message. I guess I'm saying take the passive, rather than the aggressive
Also, you really didn't put forth *exactly* what you had to offer. You already own the domain names so why not include a few in the email to better entice/connect with the recipient.
Let's say there's no contact information on the site and you're unsure of where the email you're sending will wind up. You can always start by sending to webmaster@[XYZ site] and trying the generic,
"Dear Webmaster" approach. My re-write might go as follows:
Dear [XYZ site] Webmaster,
My name is Barbara Halpern from a marketing consulting firm called Marketing Momentum <give site url>. Several years ago I purchased mortgage industry-related domain names, and I'm writing now to see
if your company might have an interest in them. Some examples include:
* Domain Name 1
* Domain Name 2
Uses for these names include:
* Developing new sites
* Re-selling to clients
If you're not the correct person to be contacting, could you please forward my email on to someone who is? I appreciate your time and assistance.
I'm sure there will be list members who'll rip apart my approach, too, Barbara, so take heart!
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